W.A.L.T: use alliteration
The music was loud. She felt like dancing.
#1 The hip hop music was the strangest sound she had ever heard. It was strangely soothing. But the hip hop music was unbearably loud. Jane had a sudden urge to dance.
#2 As Jane was walking she heard the wonderful waltz music coming from the hall. Jane found herself doing dumb dancing. One small problem, the wonderful waltz music was unusually and unbearably loud.
#3 Jane was at the wonderfully weird waltzing Matilda birthday party when the music was suddenly was turned up to its loudest. Jane danced till her feet felt like jelly.
#4 The really loud rock music was sending vibrations threw the floor. Jane was uncontrollably dancing.
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