W.A.L.T: use alliteration
The music was loud. She felt like dancing.
#1 The hip hop music was the strangest sound she had ever heard. It was strangely soothing. But the hip hop music was unbearably loud. Jane had a sudden urge to dance.
#2 As Jane was walking she heard the wonderful waltz music coming from the hall. Jane found herself doing dumb dancing. One small problem, the wonderful waltz music was unusually and unbearably loud.
#3 Jane was at the wonderfully weird waltzing Matilda birthday party when the music was suddenly was turned up to its loudest. Jane danced till her feet felt like jelly.
#4 The really loud rock music was sending vibrations threw the floor. Jane was uncontrollably dancing.
Tuesday, June 29, 2010
Sunday, June 20, 2010
The art of describing
#1 The wind blew. John got cold
#2 The strong wind was blowing fiercely. John was standing in the wind. John was shriving because he felt like he was in Antarctica.
#3 The wind was blowing so strong it was like a tornado. John was walking on the foot path watching all the news papers flying down the street.The Papers had flown out of peoples letter boxes and onto the road. He was as cold as a person in togs standing in the middle of a really big freezer. He was shriving.
The one that is GREEN is my fave one.
#2 The strong wind was blowing fiercely. John was standing in the wind. John was shriving because he felt like he was in Antarctica.
#3 The wind was blowing so strong it was like a tornado. John was walking on the foot path watching all the news papers flying down the street.The Papers had flown out of peoples letter boxes and onto the road. He was as cold as a person in togs standing in the middle of a really big freezer. He was shriving.
The one that is GREEN is my fave one.
Thursday, June 10, 2010
The Aeuay's ( My monster)
W.A.L.T describe - with VOICE
The Aeuay's have fur all over their body. Their eyes are a preicering steer,enough to make any one go mad. They have two. All the Aeuay's have blue,brown,beige skin underneath their fur. The fur is all ways brown with black streaks. They where viking's hats on their head. On their feet they have no shoes,but hard wherein soles on the bottom of their feet. The feet that they do have are thick and brown. They have 5 toes on both feet and 2 feet on both legs. They all ways carry hard wherein sword's and axes. Their sholders are big and wide. Their legs have lots of muscle as well as their arms. They have 1 nose and one big long mouth.
The Aeuay's travel in pack's of up to 100 and are the most threatening in the entire land. They have at least 100 friends all the people in their group.They're as wide as a hippo and as tall as a average adult. They don't get along well with humans because they will challenge to fight. They get along well with other's of their kind but not along well with the leader of their group. There are others of their kind witch are called Ight .Aeuay's don't like them. They always want to fight and be mean and horrible.The Aeuay's have fur all over their body. Their eyes are a preicering steer,enough to make any one go mad. They have two. All the Aeuay's have blue,brown,beige skin underneath their fur. The fur is all ways brown with black streaks. They where viking's hats on their head. On their feet they have no shoes,but hard wherein soles on the bottom of their feet. The feet that they do have are thick and brown. They have 5 toes on both feet and 2 feet on both legs. They all ways carry hard wherein sword's and axes. Their sholders are big and wide. Their legs have lots of muscle as well as their arms. They have 1 nose and one big long mouth.
Those are Aeuay's
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