Writing in Dialogue

"Hey,Katie look! Its a life ring!" said Gracie
" WOW! Its sooo beautiful," Katie said sarcastically " Do you want a picture by it? To put onto your wall??"
"OMG! Yes, Life rings are so awesome!"
" OK 3,2,1, SMILE!" Katie chirped
Katie and Gracie walked along the side of the boat.
" Hey look! Here is another one!" Gracie said in a cute voice
" WOW! Its as beautiful as a rainbow," "Not!" She added under her breath.
"Hey lets go now," Gracie said
When Katie got back to her cabin she said
WOW! My sister is sooooooooooooo obsessed with Life Rings!"

Free Writing

WOW! I am soo excited to be in my new house! It is at number 10 Chester cres down COOK ST. The living room is really big and my room is SUPER SUPER SUPER SUPER BIG! AND I get all of the after noon sun! Perfect for doing home work in the sun sitting at my desk and enjoying the fresh cool air. There is only one problem. Because I get all of the after noon sun and I ahve really light curtains it is really light when I go to sleep. But the good thing is that we can have birds at our new house because there is a bird avery! Cool right. I have all ready got my room sorted ; NO MORE BOXS!!! Because you see I had to upack all my rooms boxs so that took a long time; but now there is no more boxs so I can walk into my room without having to climb over all of these boxs. I have a desk at DADS house and I am goingt o bring that to mums house. I am going to put it in the corner that is facing the window. Becasue you see there is one wall that has a window and it turns the corner but It stops.

My Time at Riverdale

My years at Riverdale has been a smash! With all the great opportunities we've had! Heres one. In term 3 I went to the 2010 DANCE NZ MADE INTER SCHOOL Competition! We were there from 8:45 to 9:32! To be exact. I had as much fun as riding a hippo to the moon! We came first for our category. I was also in the Inter school swimming sports team! we came first with 82 points! AND it was the first time I got into any inter school sports team! In the 2010 New South Whales English and Maths Exams I got credit for English and participation in Maths! The best thing about 2010 or maybe the second best thing is that.............. I AM HEAD OF STUDENT COUNCIL! I really enjoyed the 2008 production I was in 3 acts. 1. Te Puawai 2. Choir and 3. Our class dance. I've enjoyed all of the camps especially Camp David because there was tons of fun activities! My favourite one was the 3 wire bridge and orse riding! I'm going to be very sad when I leave and I am going to miss all of my friends and junior budds and I am really going to miss my Bff Likable Libby because she was a great friend (and a bit of a comedian) I would like to thank every one for making this the best 6 years of my life!

Kate