Monday, November 29, 2010

Writing in Dialogue

"Hey,Katie look! Its a life ring!" said Gracie
" WOW! Its sooo beautiful," Katie said sarcastically " Do you want a picture by it? To put onto your wall??"
"OMG! Yes, Life rings are so awesome!"
" OK 3,2,1, SMILE!" Katie chirped
Katie and Gracie walked along the side of the boat.
" Hey look! Here is another one!" Gracie said in a cute voice
" WOW! Its as beautiful as a rainbow," "Not!" She added under her breath.
"Hey lets go now," Gracie said
When Katie got back to her cabin she said
WOW! My sister is sooooooooooooo obsessed with Life Rings!"

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