The art of describing

#1 The wind blew. John got cold
#2 The strong wind was blowing fiercely. John was standing in the wind. John was shriving because he felt like he was in Antarctica.
#3 The wind was blowing so strong it was like a tornado. John was walking on the foot path watching all the news papers flying down the street.The Papers had flown out of peoples letter boxes and onto the road. He was as cold as a person in togs standing in the middle of a really big freezer. He was shriving.


The one that is GREEN is my fave one.