26.4.10. My Writing.
My adventure in outer space!
One day while I was traveling in space in my bright blue with purple spots space rocket I ran out
of fuel! I could see a landing base and decided to land. A few minutes later I came upon a big
Purple planet. So I decided to land.(27.4.10) This planet was very hard to land on I had to put the ship into Speed land. I really hate speed land because it goes so fast that my entire body goes up to the top of the ship! But it gets the ship on the ground. Once I landed I was so deep in jungle that the doors would not open, so I had to go out the emergency shoot down through the toilet. It was NOT nice!!! Once I got out I decided to take a look around. After about an hour of walking around I came across a village well sort of. There where lots of tree hut with BIG PURPLE ALIENS in them. They had 4 eyes 4 ears 4 arms and 43 legs! They walked with a slight rocking motion. One of them came up to me and said " Beep bob beeeeeeeeeep bob bob " Then all the aliens started running at me! I ran all the way back to my ship and took of. I had enough fuel to get me back home.
And that's the end
By Kate Waterland
of fuel! I could see a landing base and decided to land. A few minutes later I came upon a big
Purple planet. So I decided to land.(27.4.10) This planet was very hard to land on I had to put the ship into Speed land. I really hate speed land because it goes so fast that my entire body goes up to the top of the ship! But it gets the ship on the ground. Once I landed I was so deep in jungle that the doors would not open, so I had to go out the emergency shoot down through the toilet. It was NOT nice!!! Once I got out I decided to take a look around. After about an hour of walking around I came across a village well sort of. There where lots of tree hut with BIG PURPLE ALIENS in them. They had 4 eyes 4 ears 4 arms and 43 legs! They walked with a slight rocking motion. One of them came up to me and said " Beep bob beeeeeeeeeep bob bob " Then all the aliens started running at me! I ran all the way back to my ship and took of. I had enough fuel to get me back home.
And that's the end
By Kate Waterland
You have an interesting start to your story Kate..it would be interesting to tease out some of your ideas, so that it had a lot more detail. I liked some of your ideas :) Well done
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